Personal Essays

1. I should make sure I feel strongly about the topic.
2. I should use a lot of detail and not make generalizations.
3. I think that I should try to not repeat I a lot, make connections, and to list only some facts if it is a personal opinion. I should also avoid getting off topic.

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